I don’t hate this book. I have to state that up front because at first I will sound like I hate this book, because I did kind of hate it until halfway through.
Matthew Lewis wrote The Monk: a Romance as a teenager, and it shows. The book feels young and immature, in both bad ways and good. As far as gothic novels in general go, this one came out in 1796. That’s 32 years after Walpole’s The Castle of Otranto and 2 years after Radcliffe’s Mysteries of Udolpho. Udolpho was Radcliffe’s fourth novel and her brand of female-centered atmospheric gothic was hugely popular when Lewis’s novel came out. It was pretty much the opposite of everything Radcliffe was doing, and The Monk started a bit of a “terror vs horror” feud in gothic writing, with Radcliffe and her crew focusing on characters’ emotions and Lewis’s side preferring graphic horror scenes.
Compared to Radcliffe’s work, Lewis’s book feels clunky and immature and really, really focused on shock value, but it’s also more exciting and unflinching about the dark side of life and the real consequences of people’s actions. With Radcliffe, innocent people pretty much always come out okay, but with Lewis (and in real life) that’s not always the case. Radcliffe wrote her final novel, The Italian, as a sort of response to and correction of The Monk, and I have to say it’s really good. But it’s also way more tightly and darkly written than Udolpho, so as much as Radcliffe criticized Lewis’s style, it may have given her some new ideas. But enough about context. Let’s get to the actual book, shall we?
First, The Monk’s pacing is really off. Lewis will spend pages and pages on a minor plot point and then rush through a major one way too fast. He’ll bring you to some really tense point in the monk’s story, then suddenly spend three chapters catching you up on someone else’s life. Or he’ll switch from the present moment to months in the past and then back again in a jarring way. Some of this is because he’s trying to weave together several storylines into one dramatic ending, which is hard to balance even for an experienced novelist, and he just doesn’t do a great job at it.
His pacing wasn’t the only thing hard to deal with. Lewis tends to switch from humor to horror and back in really sudden and odd ways. The book actually starts off this way. All the fashionable people of Madrid, including several main characters, are gathering to hear a sermon from the celebrated Ambrosio (the monk in the title) and the scene is described in a light-hearted and funny way. One of our heroes, Lorenzo, stays in the chapel as the sermon ends and night falls, feeling a bit romantic and melancholy, and dozes off. Suddenly he’s having a terrible nightmare (which gives away huge plot points, by the way), we’re plunged into terror, and then he wakes up and the tone changes completely again. There’s no blending of comedy and horror, no real transition, it’s not black humor, he just randomly interrupts his comedy with horror and randomly interrupts his horror with comedy sometimes. It’s annoying.
The Monk also seems really anti-Catholic. Honestly, a lot of the original gothic novelists, being British protestants, thought Catholics were a bit silly and superstitious and looked down on saints and relics as a form of idol worship, but while Ann Radcliffe or Horace Walpole would use a Catholic country as an exotic and magical backdrop or use the Inquisition as a terror element, Lewis takes this feeling a lot farther. He makes pointed jokes and speeches about Catholic superstition and pictures convents and monasteries as hotbeds of sin ruled over by hypocritical tyrants, while implying that anyone sensible in the book is almost a secret Anglican. This is actually really weird because Lewis will make fun of a character’s silly belief in ghosts and demons, then tell us ghosts and demons are definitely real. It feels immature and too mean, and it pulled me out of the atmosphere several times.
So far it seems like I hate this book. I warned you it would. But I had to start with that because the things I loved about this novel are also kind of immature and clunky. For the first half, maybe two thirds of this book I was kind of bored and annoyed at this third rate gothic romance, and then suddenly it became a straight up horror novel. Murders, kidnap and torture, literal deals with the devil, most of it told in enough graphic detail to satisfy even a modern horror reader. It’s exactly what you’d expect from a teenager trying to think up the scariest, most shocking horror they could, and it’s great stuff.
In this part, all that slow build up and long description we expect from old novels just draws out the horror and suspense in the most delicious way. Lewis will take three pages to describe someone’s murder or even longer to reveal a tragic prisoner’s location. It’s a bit overdone, but in a campy b-movie way that’s really fun, and occasionally it went deeper than that and was truly sad and horrific. I don’t want to spoil the ending, even for a book this old, so I’ll just say that as dramatic and depraved as Ambrosio’s part in this is, poor Agnes from the convent next door is the real attraction. Her story is far more suspenseful and scary and tragic than Ambrosio’s, and the novel is worth reading just for her.
Without Agnes this book would only merit one or two Haunted Houses, but Agnes earns it a third House all by herself.
With this, I’ve read nine of the top ten books on my list, but I’m actually skipping to number 11 now. Near Christmas I like to read ghost stories, and Susan Hill’s The Woman in Black looks like a perfect choice. It promises to be a quick read, too, so I hope to tell you all about it soon.